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It's not hate ( translated version of: Dis nie haat nie)
Contributed by
Kellros
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 06:54:36 PM in AEST
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It's the hate that drives us,
it's the poison in our blood that gladdens us
its the darkness that cuts into our hearts,
hell is here and here it will stay
what is hope, if we wait upon death, what is love,
if people strive to hate
will we ever forget, of all the hate in our lives,
the violence we relive, everyday of our life
will our hearts ever be pure, if we're but human,
will God ever forgive us, if we're possessed by demons,
will we ask for forgiveness, if we know we're wrong,
or will we live our own hell
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2005-03-19 18:54:36]
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Re: It's not hate ( translated version of: Dis nie haat nie)
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by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:11:14 PM AEST
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| Extremely powerful write. I felt every word like a piercing knife. Great write! |
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Re: It's not hate ( translated version of: Dis nie haat nie)
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:50:34 PM AEST
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| from the first verse, it is inescapable that you have immense talent. and its good to see that you use it to its potential. brilliant poem. |
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