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The Poem of Sorrow
Contributed by
thepos
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:42:51 PM in AEST
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The Poem of Sorrow
I close my eye's,
And I count to ten.
I hope everything is better,
When I open them.
I walk the road,
That I once said.
"I have a great future,
Up ahead."
But I was wrong,
I've made some mistakes.
Some feel like my heart,
Is being stabbed by stakes.
Oh, please mommy,
Please don't stare.
I've ruined my life,
But now I care.
But it's to late,
I've commited sins.
I still ask myself,
Why death always wins.
I'm filled with hatred,
These lies in my head.
I can't find a way,
Out of my dread.
For I've done bad things,
I've done no good in this land.
If I go to hell,
I will understand.
But I'm afraid,
To leave this place.
It's just to much for me,
To embrace.
I feel so sad,
I start to cry.
I am so confused,
I don't know why.
I guess some things,
Weren't ment to be.
You of those things,
Would be me.
I can't pray to god,
Because I don't care one bit.
I wish I could,
And I throw a fit.
I kick the walls,
Because I'm mad.
I'm so sorry,
I disappoint you dad.
I wish to end my life,
So I won't live in fear.
To never know,
When death is near.
I want to die,
And not go to hell.
But there's no way,
I could ever tell.
I want my life,
To go away.
So I could just end,
Always being afraid.
If there was some way,
To know if my pain won't extend.
When my life,
Comes to an end.
I am sorry to everyone,
Everyone I've hurt.
I made you feel like *****,
I made you feel like dirt.
I didn't care about your life,
All I cared about was me.
I wish I could care about everyone,
And clear my hate debris.
I lay in my bed,
I try to sleep.
But I can't stop thinking,
"When will death creep?"
I have no friends,
But I want to change.
But I can't take back my sins,
And fate won't rearrange.
--Evan L.--
more of my poetry at http://thepoemsofsorrow.com
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Re: The Poem of Sorrow
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 02:21:41 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem. It kind of made me blue. I guess you know its good if it can evoke emotion from its readers.
Thanks for sharing it, betty |
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