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Turquoise - A Cinquain
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:36:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Turquoise
Stone of my heart
You cast a spell I think
Shades of sky blue play the light well
Magic
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2005-03-19 13:36:20]
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Re: Turquoise - A Cinquain
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by kodiak_2312 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:41:56 PM AEST
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thats very pretty..
Cinquains are the hardest i think and you did marvelous (sp?)
keep up the great work!
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Re: Turquoise - A Cinquain
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:56:44 AM AEST
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I have no idea what a cinquain is, but I really liked this... especially for how short it was. Quite descriptive this was. I am sure the length that is was reflect on the fact that it is a cinquain... or am I wrong? Nice write though...
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Re: Turquoise - A Cinquain
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by pastiche247 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:28:24 PM AEST
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The cinquain is really difficult. It's a tough job to follow the restrictive format and yet keep the sense.
And - come up with a beautiful poem!
But you have done this!
Jewel, play of light, heart, spell, magic!
Really elegant!
Best,
p |
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