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Now I'm Just A Memory.....
Contributed by
mina-1
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:52:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Now I'm an elusive memory
Packed deep within your mind
Do you try to erase me
So traces of me you don't find
I always send you images
Of love that once was strong
You left me with no answers
You told me our love was so wrong
I was once the sole keeper
Of your sweet and loving heart
Now I'm the seeker
Trying to break your rampart
How can you walk away
Desert me in such a way
My tears cascade on my face
As the moon shadows from its umbrae
We had an exquisite love
Only shared by few
That once perfect romance
Is as cold as the morning's dew
You said you didn't love me
That you no longer cared
Leaving me to make amends
So your heart you wanted spared
For now I only dwell
In the midst of your mind
Waiting, hoping and praying
My love once again you'll find
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mina-1
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:09:18 AM AEST
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| I hear you. I've been through that myself & I know how it feels. I liked it. It was great. |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:03:21 AM AEST
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This poem is so touching one might think it
was sprinkled with a love potion . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by allymp on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:16:54 AM AEST
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i loved it
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:00:48 AM AEST
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| Great Job!! I loved it too! |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by dvsnme816 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:16:28 AM AEST
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WOW!!!
Such exclusive material I've been reading from you..made me think of the past,...on the other hand...nevermind on that one,...hehe
t'was delicately coiled together like a noodle and a fork. |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 12:11:37 PM AEST
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you bared your soul and your heart here *hugs* a very depe and touching poem,
pix xx |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by inoc on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one, it has a heartbeat inside it thats trying to make that memory a real life romance again...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:20:39 AM AEST
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AN OUTSTANDING POEM I HAVE TO ADMIT!
YOU GOT A BIG FIVE FROM ME!! SORRY ABOUT WHAT INSPIRED YOU,BUT GIRL THIS POEM & YOU HAVE GOT ALL THE GAME A HEART EVER NEEDS!!! PLEASE KEEP EM' COMING!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:22:29 AM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes Mina.
An exeptional write.
Brilliant yet so sad.
Hoping the sun shines for you again soon
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:37:40 PM AEST
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| excellent poem, sue. but i suggest, that you dont wait your life away. what is a life without love? a better life than waiting for love. |
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Re: Now I'm Just A Memory.....
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by jmpy84 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:20:34 AM AEST
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| Wonderful Write |
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