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Her Final Plea
Contributed by
SimplyMe
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:05:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Tears slide down her face without reason or warning
Believe it or don't but she's mourning
She's mourning for a man she once despised
None of that matters as she looks into his crystal like eyes
The life fades from them as each second passes by
His breathing grows weaker as she begins to cry
She slowly looks to floor
Because she now knows her father is no more
As she stands at his beside saying her final goodbye
One question comes to mind "why"?
Why weren't you the father you were supposed to be?
Was it something i did daddy? Please tell me was it me?
Don't ignore me daddy
Open your eyes look at me
Tell me why you were never there
Why you even wasted your time pretending to care
Don't go daddy
Please i need you don't leave me
She turns to see the nurses enter the room
She's too stubborn to believe he's doomed
She fights giving it her all
She realizes she is too weak and her voice echoes through the halls
No stop!! don't take out the I.V
Please i beg you don't take my daddy from me
Leave that there he needs to breathe!!
Daddy don't go..don't leave
Wake up daddy i need you
Stop!! where are you taking him? What are you going to do?
Open your eyes daddy their killing you!!
Knowing her efforts failed she bows her head
Avoiding any eye contact with the now empty bed
With very little energy left she drops to her knees
She looks up and begins her final plea
Dear God please let him through Heaven's pearly gates
Please remind him thats it's never too late
Take him by the hand
And let him know it's never too late to stand up and be a man
To be the father i needed him to be
It's never too late to love me
Please God forgive him for his sins
And please God tell him this again
Tell him even after everything we've been through
I've forgiven him too
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SimplyMe
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2005-03-19 03:05:43]
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:49:32 AM AEST
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Your poem has a lot of heart, I really hope u pull ur father aside one day and ask him to read this so it doesent end the same.
Good Luck
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:26:04 AM AEST
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Wow!
This one is a masterpeice of humongeos luv in these words......It's all heart and will touch each soul that reads it. Jus pure luv..
It speaks to the soul and really is so tender at the same time.
remarkablely written.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:14:47 AM AEST
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A remarkably written piece of poetry.
The words touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. A truly touching piece that will touch whom ever may read it.
Well done.
So sorry for the pain though.
Hugs,
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by Kie on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:58:59 AM AEST
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I never expected to be sitting here and crying on a Saturday morning with spring blossoming outside but this poem sure brought it on.
I think your poem was composed very well. It touched the deepest parts of me. It also inundated me with losses that are still fresh memories.
Kie |
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 09:32:34 AM AEST
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This is a poetic masterpeice along with reaching in 2 the heart of who's ever reading it and evoking the tears that this beautiful
peice of writting deserves powerful and yet
so tender ********** 4 the poem and **********
4 the poet who wrote it . . .
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 12:33:38 PM AEST
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aww that poem brought a tear to my eye, it was so sad and written so well, *hugs8
pix xx |
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 04:11:32 PM AEST
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For everybody that has read my poem. (My Granfather) Henry George Overy is on his final breath. The doctors are taking him off all machines, and they say he has a matter of hours to live. His body is shutting down. For everybody that read my poem. Please keep him in your prayers. Thank you all.
~Alucia~
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Re: Her Final Plea
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 09:20:38 AM AEST
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Your words tore at my heart I am sitting here with tears flowing on the keyboard. How beautifully expressed.
My heart goes out to you.
Your grandad and family are in my prayers
May the angels look after you all
Love Angelxxx |
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