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Child In The Corner
Contributed by
Live2Die
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Theres a child sitting in that corner
Bet you didn’t notice,
Just looked right past.
Well now you get to learn
All about what happened
To the invisible child
Sitting in that corner.
The child in that corner
Was once a happy face
To replace this there is only
Fake smiles, and see-through laughs.
The child in that corner
Lost everything she had.
Once there was a loving mother,
Once there was a handsome father.
Now there is only a black hole,
Sitting in her heart.
The child in that corner
Once had a home,
With a wonderful bed
And delicious food.
Now there is no home,
No bed, no food, just that corner.
The child in that corner
Her eyes are empty,
Her heart full of holes.
Her body lost all its grace,
Now it’s like an empty shell,
With a rotting soul inside.
The child in that corner
Her life has gone to dust.
Where there once was light,
There now is dark.
The child in that corner,
That child is no more.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2005-03-18 23:18:34]
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:33:23 AM AEST
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| Hi! WOW!!!!!!! that poem was AMAZING, very sad. I was going to say I could relate to it but, I can't in a way that is good. I feel sorry for that poor child. Very Very good write I'm proud of you even though you don't know me. K well I'll b going now Bye!!!!
W/ Luv 4 Lyfe
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:09:29 AM AEST
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I often find myself as the child in the corner. Strange that you find such comfort and peace from it huh? Anyways i loved your poem. It kinda made my day :-) Good job.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:26:54 AM AEST
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is amazing piece and very sad..
well done. |
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:48:14 AM AEST
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Aww this was so sad, very well writen and the emotions where so deep. Good write.
Jane |
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by allymp on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:47:41 AM AEST
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very sad, nicely written
good job |
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Re: Child In The Corner
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 12:34:21 PM AEST
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emotional and dark very well put together
pix xx |
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