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Running into nothing...by simmy
Contributed by
simmy
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Looked through the nightmares,
sat there awoken.
Bleeding in pain,
for her name shall never be spoken.
Running fast,
tracks are missing.
Looking back,
as boys are kissing.
Crying inside,
falling apart.
Eyes are bleeding,
bleeding on her messed up art.
Bugs are crawling,
crawling all over her skin.
Trying to find her dream,
but memory arives with every single sin.
Copyright ©
simmy
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2005-03-18 21:29:14]
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Re: Running into nothing...by simmy
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by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:13:26 AM AEST
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Re: Running into nothing...by simmy
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:02:18 PM AEST
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I think the title is very good. Confusion and caos are displayed here very well.
Well written, though perhaps a bit too confusing.
Take care,
David |
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