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That Night
Contributed by
sweet_lil_b2003
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see someone lying on the ground
From a distance
Darkened by the shadows of night
As I get close
I reconize the person
I realize its you
I could never forget those
outgoing blue eyes, or the mischief in your smile
And your soft joyous lips
But, most of all your tender loving heart
What had happened to you?
You lay in front of me
With thoise same eyes and that smile
Could it really be you?
As I begin to turn away
I catch a glimpse of a note in your pocket
I look it over
It's adressed to me...
~ Crystal ~
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2005-03-18 20:37:41]
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Re: That Night
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:50:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful peice of loviness and tender writtitng i was touched by this work of poetic art . . .
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Re: That Night
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:53:35 AM AEST
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a real captivating write you have here, Crystal.
The suspense of the poem makes it intriguing. A very well written poem. keep it up, Crystal.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: That Night
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by JasTrask_22 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:40:20 PM AEST
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OMG awesome write... i love that poem.. as well as your others:P:P
it was awesome, it really touched me!
ttyl
Jasmine |
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Re: That Night
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:12:45 PM AEST
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| great poem, especially the ending!! |
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