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Fix Me

Contributed by deb_lalala on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 07:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You know the saying
If it ain't broke, don't fix it?
Well, I'm broken.

Fix me...

How that can be accomplished- I don't know.
I'm not a doctor- nor a mechanic,
so I guess I'm ***** if I want to be fixed anytime soon.
But that's okay-- I can wait..
As always, I will wait,
but what's wrong with wanting something for yourself done for a change, when you're always letting others move ahead?
Is that selfish?To want something of your own for once?
I don't think so but everyone else does..

Just because I don't meet "society's" standards does not mean that I am not a human being that should be **** on by others when all I have done has been nothing less than kind.
I've had it.
**** being nice.
Where does it get you?
I'll tell you.
It gets you **** on. That's where.
The little man always comes in last...
So why should I care about other's feelings when they can't give a rat's *** about mine?

Because I could never stoop that low.
Those people are ugly, twisted, sick ***** that can rot in hell.
I'm not saying I'm an angel or anyhing and going to heaven, but at least I don't get my jollies off by being greedy.
I'm also going to hell, but with the knowledge that society didn't brainwash me into a selfish zombie.
I am my own person.
If what I say offends you,
the most I can say is don't read it,
but since you've already made it thus far,
subconsciously or not--you are intrigued--so why stop now?
I'll tell you why.
In my writing, I make the Rules...
you'll stop reading this poem or rant or whatever the **** it is because it ends

here.

Copyright © deb_lalala ... [ 2005-03-18 19:25:43]
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Re: Fix Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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ouchies...this one hurt to read..but tis very good...

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