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withered and broken
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:12:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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u pick a flower and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
you throw it aside no thankful words you have spoken,
the flower lay used,wasted and broken.
u pick a lover and cherish them,until you are withered and weak,
they throw u aside no thankful word have they spoken,
your heart lays used,wasted and broken.
u pick a religion and cherish it,until it is withered and weak,
no truth here u seek,for you can not find ,the pieces are withered and broken,
scattered through your mind.
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blackholesun
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2005-03-18 17:12:39]
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Re: withered and broken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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| I loved the flow, you had me off for a second with the flowers, but then questioning the relationships with love and religion I saw the flow. |
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Re: withered and broken
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:03:19 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of writting . . .
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Re: withered and broken
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:20:56 PM AEST
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LOVE IT!!!!!!! Wow, this is very powerful and heart-wrenching.. To lose a lover is bad enough.. but to lose something that you have believed in.. had faith in... you feel like there is no hope left... Cheri, I have been through this many times.. and know how this feels quite well. If you need a pair of listening ears, I'm here. Or just someone to talk to about your day, I'm here for that too. I like to ramble, and i'm not afraid to admit that I do, lol. Excellent piece of perfection. Your writing never fails to enchant and beguil. Thank you so much for sharing. All my love. Forever,
Your friend and fan,
Stephy. |
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