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Love Came soflty
Contributed by
mickie
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:17:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love came softly,
and landed in my lap.
At first it was comfortable,
At first it gave me peace.
But now love caused questions to arise
that I cannot answer...
Love came soflty,
and left me numb inside,
turning me, changing me
into another person that I always saw from a
distance.
I saw her in my past,
I saw her in my present,
But I never saw her in my future...
Love came soflty,
and left ,
and showed himself to me,
and I saw beauty.
I saw truth.
I saw what I hoped to see...
Love came soflty.
Copyright ©
mickie
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2005-03-18 16:17:26]
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Re: Love Came soflty
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:28:13 PM AEST
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A beautiful write...
I loved the...and landed on my lap
At first it was comfortable....
I think that was so cute!!!
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Re: Love Came soflty
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:24:25 PM AEST
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I love the way you put this together so soft just as your title it leaves a nice feeling reading it
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Re: Love Came soflty
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by Kie on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:46:39 PM AEST
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This is lovely, smooth and soft.
The title was also perfect it encompassed the feel of the poem.
Kie |
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