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She Lay Beautiful
Contributed by
inoc
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:41:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Stop and stare.
Stare and stop.
Walk to her.
Her to walk.
Smile I do.
Do I smile.
Lovely to hold.
Hold too lovely
So cute laying.
Laying so cute.
Babe' cries softly.
Softly cries babe.
Time for breastfeeding.
Breastfeeding for time.
Treasure of moment.
Moment of treasure.
Remember first born.
First born remember.
God works miracles.
Miracles work God.
Sweet sixteen now.
Now sixteen sweet.
Forever for memories.
Memories forever.
Copyright ©
inoc
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2005-03-18 15:41:41]
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Re: She Lay Beautiful
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:50:34 PM AEST
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AND SHE IS CALLED DEVINITY'S CHILD
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: She Lay Beautiful
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:26:01 PM AEST
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liked your style and though she is 16 she probally still seems like your sweet babe doesnt she. Beautiful write brought a tear to my eye
Michelle |
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Re: She Lay Beautiful
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:17:49 AM AEST
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Very creative wrok.
huggs,
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