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Through the flames
Contributed by
loopylou
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:32:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Trust thin and frail
fallen on the floor
phone off the rails
your words of treason no more
Close your eyes now
a coma of a sleep
can i look up now?
scared to wish it was a dream
dreams of you in flames
smoke filling the room
you burn before me
and i love you more than i even knew
Just ashes and dust lay before us now
dirt that's thick and brown
as we pick ourselves up from the ground
buiding on the foundations
i never knew we had
through the treason
through the betrayal
anger hot
like the dark smoke we inhaled
through the drakness
that burned too bright
you were always just a match
that no one knew could light
And looking at us now
as we come together
i know we made it through
that blazing weather
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2005-03-18 15:32:11]
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Re: Through the flames
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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flowed nicely I like the way you compared life to matches flame smoke etc nicely done
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Re: Through the flames
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by EverlastingDawn on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:58:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. Your imagery is awe-inspiring and beautiful. Your personification is vivid and inspiring. Great Write.
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