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A Lover's Illusion....

Contributed by mina-1 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The stream thrusts it's currents
Amidst the water that flows into the
river freely
As the tears on my face do their dance
Slowly waltzing smoothly, but deeply
The ring of fear harbours
In the depths of my ears
Ringing bells constantly
When the wind bellows its gust of fear
The echo chanting of a lover's
struggle to engage
In a love so deep and passionate
Entangled in quarrel and rage
Connecting ties fusing at the heart
Chapters to fill a novel
Giving you enthralment from the start
Sultry heat casts an illusion of twisted fate
Can we rekindle this love?
Or is it simply just too late?




Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-03-18 15:03:12]
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Re: A Lover's Illusion.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:04:25 PM AEST
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written with great flow and great emotion
pix xx


Re: A Lover's Illusion.... (User Rating: 1 )
by dvsnme816 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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WOW
That was...sleek and sexy, in nice way not in the provocative way,hehe jk...really


Re: A Lover's Illusion.... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:11:10 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL AND HEART WARMING AS IS

ALWAYS THE CASE WITH YOUR WORDS . .

DORIAN CHAMBERS


Re: A Lover's Illusion.... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:39:41 AM AEST
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Unique poem from a talented writer.
Your words flow like the ripples on the sea.

Divine write

Love Angelxxx




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