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Stories of Refuge: Whisper
Contributed by
MysticThornz
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hello... Are you there? I'm trapped... inside my head. Can you help me? I promise I'm okay. Are you okay? Will you help me? I'm afraid that I belong... I don't want to belong. I'm sad. I'm happy. No, I'm sad. Maybe you can help me?
What's your name? Do you have any friends? Enemies? No. You're alone too. I'm sorry. I shouldn't bother you with all my problems because you have your own. We all have problems, don't we? What's your problem?
I'm stuck in my head and I can't get out. The monsters scare me, make me weak. I wish you were here. Maybe you can help me. No maybes. We say maybe to often.
We have many possiblities in life. I want out. I want out of my head... maybe I'm whispering to myself.
I'm two people; that which I keep hidden and that which I show.
Kara
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MysticThornz
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2002-12-18 03:00:00]
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Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:25:01 AM AEST
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It appears to me you've both been inside my head as well MysticThornz,
I really like this, it's how my head works also!
Excellent writing,
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper
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by MysticThornz on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:50:07 PM AEST
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Why thank you Dean, most possibly gong to have to read what you write to see if you've been inside my head as well.
Love YA
Pandora
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Re: Stories of Refuge: Whisper
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:29:31 AM AEST
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| nice change from the common poem form. |
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