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Where can I start?
Contributed by
allymp
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:29:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I sit here with my pen
Just wondering what to say
Theres so many emotions
Running through my mind each day
I'm not sure where to start
So that people will understand
Exactly how it feels
To be stuck within this dreamland
So far away from realitly
Not sure of where I belong
And not sure of what to do
I've just been waiting for so long
For something to come way way
That I can call my own
I'm so sick of this longing
To be more than just a clone
So God, if you can hear me
Please listen to what I say
Guide me to your light
And help me find my way
Copyright ©
allymp
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2005-03-18 11:29:26]
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Re: Where can I start?
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by Sinned on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:22:15 PM AEST
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Allymp
I like this,but think you could have done better with a little more thought.
PS. I had to chuckle at your typ-error "For something to come my way way"
I have done the same thing in a hurry to post I guess.
You girl keep writing you are good and can only get better.
This world needs people like You.
Sinned
ps.too--thanks for all your comments on my writings. |
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Re: Where can I start?
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by RavenShadows on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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| Great job, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Where can I start?
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by inoc on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:13:17 PM AEST
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I loved your write....
I know what you are going through...
I have not been posting lately....your poem is exactly what I went through...and I am sure others too....!
I well written honest poem...
cheer!!~ |
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Re: Where can I start?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:27:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. The flow was great. I really enjoyed this piece. Nice work :-) |
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Re: Where can I start?
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:21:56 PM AEST
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| Excellent work in a uniquely laid out poem. The subject matter was so relatable too, about a place where so many of us have come to at one point or another. nicely done |
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