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Now That Your Gone
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want you back now that you're gone.
My heart's a pit no love can fill.
I stumble through my days of stone
Bereft of joy, bereft of will.
I could not tell myself I loved
You as I did for fear of pain.
Far easier not to be moved,
Than moved to love, and hurt again.
How foolish! I loved anyway,
And now the blame is all my own.
Please rescue me, this torture stay,
And for my sin I will atone.
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concrete_rose
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2005-03-18 11:03:18]
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Re: Now That Your Gone
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:11:52 PM AEST
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PERFECT!!!!!!!!
Forever,
FleurdeSang *Stephy* |
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Re: Now That Your Gone
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by RavenShadows on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:30:01 AM AEST
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| I can totally relate. A good write... |
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Re: Now That Your Gone
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by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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| How very true! I thought it was fantastic! |
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