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Don't Let it Fray
Contributed by
row
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 07:28:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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don't let it fray
the chords let it stay
so I can keep it
for one more day
two if you do
as I want you to
and play the next major
it rings in me for two
on the third I fall
you can hear me down the hall
the minor has got me
now I'm just waiting for your call
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row
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2005-03-18 07:28:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don't Let it Fray
(User Rating: 1 ) by caramelskyair on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:09:27 AM AEST (User
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love it.
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Re: Don't Let it Fray
(User Rating: 1 ) by RavenShadows on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:14:53 AM AEST (User
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good job |
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Re: Don't Let it Fray
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:13:23 PM AEST (User
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great stuff mate |
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