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Say Goodbye

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:31:57 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



That look in your eye
no one can deny
the look that said " I love you"
but you still said Good bye

looked in my face
soaked up the pain
of losing what you had
but you still walked away

Don't look back
I'm part of your past
you drank all of me far from your brain
only memories of the arguments you choose
to let remian

On me you placed the blame
so it was easier to say

You had no reasons only what
you twisted up of us

You shut the door
as you turned far from me
as I crumbled to the floor

Now you don't care
you act as if I was never there

Searching for yourself
day by day
Your forgetting all of me as I slowly
fade far away

JENNI




Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2005-03-18 00:31:57]
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Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:39:31 AM AEST
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i like this and can relate.
u potray ur feelings of pain and betrayal well.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:39:51 AM AEST
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Wow...You can reallt write...I feel for you on this one, I would have to sya if he wanted to place blame he was not worth being with...Great write though...And remember its not what he remembers of you, Its what you remember of him, that is what TRULY matters.


Clark


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:45:37 AM AEST
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Sad but great writting.
As long as I live I'll never understand why men do this.
keep writing girl.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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honestly sorrowful, simplely laced in complex emotions, this is a great write with a strong emotional force behind it
may you never fade far away

... in words electrique


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:58:34 AM AEST
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i totally agree wit everybody comments, nice writting again.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:10:59 AM AEST
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I can definately relate to this piece sooo much! Amazingly written. You have a great way with words. Nice work.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:11:55 AM AEST
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Great write, i can def relate to that.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:36:00 AM AEST
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Jenni this was such a sad write, i could totally relate to this since we just broke up with our exes on the same month.

This brings so much happy and sad memories. Thanks for sharing.

Jane


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:46:28 AM AEST
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This write leaves my heart heavy for you
All the best Jenni...
You wrote this so well
Specially liked the 3rd line...and the rest!!!

















Love the write Jenni
You write so beaut!
But my heart feels heavy for you!
All the best and take care!
Inoc!!~









Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:23:42 PM AEST
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powerful and deep, so many emotions in this write Jenni. *hugs*
pix xx


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:44:16 AM AEST
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Hey girl,
Was jus over here enjoying your writng again and since I first commented I jus wanted to say I rethunk my comment and now I understand why they do 'cause I remember being on the other side of this story years ago and I could name many reasons why but when I looked in the mirror I can see my ownself.
A great write as there's healing in this mirror u refleck.
luv ya,
emy
Very powerfull write.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:54:36 AM AEST
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WOW whoooaaaa yahoooooooooo this was a great write.... IF there was 10 stars i'll give 10 stars for this write..

SAD but great the words the format everything
great job

KeEp up the great work

10 * * * * * * * * * *


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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Your heartwrenching desrcription does your pain justice... a vivid picture came to life as I read this one... just a tough goodbye... The poem is sad, but... there's something in the tone that says, "I know you've chosen things to be this way and it hurts me but I understand somehow even though I disagree."
Maybe I'm reading too far into it, but that's what I got out of it... so... you've done a good job making your readers think.

Lots of love and peace,

Chelsea


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:20:59 PM AEST
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awe.. to love and not be loved back. Taking in so much love and promise to be broken and let go never to remembered .. it hurts.


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:24:58 PM AEST
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That was sad Jenni. I felt the emotion. Great writing. Thank you. Tim


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Maciej on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 12:54:44 AM AEST
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wow thats simply amazing the poem depicts all of the angst i felt at the end of my last relationship wow im giong to read it over and over


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:03:45 PM AEST
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Wow that was awsome. I love it.
-Jen


Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Queentzie on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:33:47 PM AEST
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B-E-A-U-Tiful!




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