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Never to see The Light of Day
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:03:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Misery
The only fate
That seeks you
Hate
Everyone and
All things to come
Bland
Colors that fade
Which surpass you
Delayed
As to never reach
As you were to die in your sleep
Being nothing that was loved
Your enternal rest
Everlasted Acoma, not at all sent from above
A life never to ever awake
Or confess
...
For you never lived
And your life never spoken
For your death
Came with
...
Abortion
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-17 23:03:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never to see The Light of Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:12:56 PM AEST (User
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brilliant poem. though i am proabortion, this really spoke to me. sometimes the light of day isnt worth seeing because the darkness overshadows it still even with nothing there...this was an amazing piece. i rather liked this one a lot. surprising, since it doesnt really adhere to my beliefs. good poetry does that eh? |
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Re: Never to see The Light of Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by electrique_poet on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:41:30 AM AEST (User
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well done, moving in a very deep sense, this is a great poem
... in words electrique |
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Re: Never to see The Light of Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:01:31 AM AEST (User
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this is great and touching, i didnt expect that ending. well done, the element of surprise is always powerful |
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