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Hope
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:32:00 PM in AEST
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Over and under, and through the pages
One who wants tries not to be aging
They seek and know what is to be
Is the love and freedom of the one
They smile and want and have acheieved
The greastest gift, which is great needed
The hope and heart which has no fear
To hold the love is the greastest cheer
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2005-03-17 21:32:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Un4GivenSoul on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:42:24 PM AEST (User
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it's good but you should have tryed to make it a little longer |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by greeneyes on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:23:35 PM AEST (User
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So true, good writing.
Nancy |
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