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Trying to put in words,,,,,for one to know

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Have you ever had a best friend in the world.......who thinks nothing of theirself?

The day is young, and one is thinking ;yet not
They see the life which isnt the best for them, yet wonderful for others
Would give the shirt off the back, and then, wanna chew the fat
Would stick their neck out, yet make the one who holds the heart a greater task

Holds a rose, yet to another make the other no holds
Keeps a promise, yet makes no honors
Has the deepset heart, yet wouldn't pardon from it
Would bend and bleed...........and still go on

How can one , be that honest.....but can not see

If they have lost .they can prevail
All they have to do is ask and sail
They have what all is needed
To be the one who has succeced

I can say this they would give the heart
But to one who doesnt need, instead they depart.

Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-03-17 21:23:50]
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Re: Trying to put in words,,,,,for one to know (User Rating: 1 )
by englishprincej on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:27:05 AM AEST
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I love your poetry. Takes some understanding but the words and images you use are very clear and powerful.

Enjoy your use of new language, hurst ? please explain or was it a St Patricks poem, lol

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