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Nothing Left To Give
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Id like to think im strong,
But deep down I know im weak.
I cant even find out what im feeling,
Peace at mind is all I seek.
I have morals and beliefs,
But theyve all gone down the drain.
Ive done something so wrong,
And all I have left is shame.
Ive given you my heart,
I handed you my soul.
I wish I never let it get,
This out of control.
You own my mind,
And youve managed to gain my heart.
And now im waiting expectingly,
For me to fall apart.
Now you have my body,
I cant give you anymore.
Now im ******* terrified,
You're gonna walk out of the door.
I seemed to give in so easily,
Though I dont know why.
I really regret my act of lust,
All I do now is cry.
God frowns on me with disapproval,
And people call me a whore.
I have nothing left to give,
I dont have anything anymore.
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Re: Nothing Left To Give
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by Rae on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:06:37 PM AEST
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| aww.. i hope he doesn't leave u. i hope u the best. btw, great write. |
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Re: Nothing Left To Give
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:44:58 PM AEST
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Virginity is not a state of body,
but rather, a state of mind.
There are womenwho are technically virgins,
yet they dress and act as if they lost their
virginity to every man in the world.
Remember, you hold your own virginity.
No one can take it from you, not even God.
Besides, I don't think God will ever frown on
you. Because you made Him smile by simply
realizing your fault and accepting it. It takes a lot of courage to do that. Most people can't
even accept their own faults.
This is a very nice poem.
Keep writing!
-Butch |
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Re: Nothing Left To Give
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by ruthie1983 on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:42:56 AM AEST
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| interesting writing, but i hope it works out. |
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Re: Nothing Left To Give
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:29:49 PM AEST
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a deep and emotive write ,well expressed
pix xx |
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