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no one to hug
Contributed by
reprobate
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Standing at the door, staring in disbelief
this room seems larger, emptier than ever
it's furniture is shrouded in drape-filtered light
our bed appears emphasized in bright parlor
Footsteps echo in the dark, lonely hall
caught myself listening for that 'busy hum'
so it goes throughout the house of just me
my heart searching for what my eyes can't find
Always a smile, even plenty of laughs
pie from a single fork or a search for a contact
that which was shared completely filled our day
many a happy moment made the home of us
Flowers for the occasion and some for just because
Hugs for no reason or to ease some sad thought
that was us and our happily ever after
no longer...all the flowers are safe
Life is a web and we are as spiders upon
fairy strands of dreams that lured and caught
we snared each other with pluck and vigor
now you're gone, leaving me in the web with rigor
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Re: no one to hug
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:39:07 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem, especially the ending. ::hugs:: |
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Re: no one to hug
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:50:31 PM AEST
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I am so sorry. I know that lonely search for what should have been. Waiting for that gently touch or kiss, just because. I wish you happiness and success in finding what you are looking for. Everyone deserves it, we live for it.
Dove |
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Re: no one to hug
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by brew on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 03:23:56 PM AEST
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Well not to say I hate spiders...............and Black widows, are worse..........lol A little humor in this ok.!
hey, you seem to let that web go to the flooor, and it should of and should never come back. Sorry........yet not.!
Brew~ |
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Re: no one to hug
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 11:01:08 AM AEST
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Oh gosh, this was lonely and sad in it's feel. I hate to be alone, never have been good at it. Maybe there is just so much I have to share....thinking of these feelings you describe, scare me. Life is definitely a web my friend, it is how we are all connected. I am glad our strands have crossed, friendships can be such a tight weave.
*hugs you tightly*
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: no one to hug
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 03:35:10 AM AEST
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this is one of those poems that is tangibly breathing,
the shock of that happening to you makes me here the
echos of footfall, the laughter that now lives in walls, but
michael now you have me wanting pie! and o! -----> Life
is a web and we are as spiders upon fairy strands of dreams impressive!
love n' oodles of hugs, nessa |
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