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Last String Left to Pull
Contributed by
upomik
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:49:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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So much yelling
Blamed for uncommitted crimes
I hide inside myy mind
Dreaming of better times
I'm target practice for my parents
But I'm almost worn out
When I'm gone then what will they do?
They'll have no one to push around
Eyes constantly cast downward
Always glued to the floor
Just let the words wash over me
Can't fight back anymore
Ignoring all who inquire
No one understands
Tears collect at my feet
Push away helping hands
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-03-17 17:49:05]
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Re: Last String Left to Pull
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:42:10 PM AEST
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just some thoughts...
life is an echo - we get what we give; that which we see in others is really inside us.
if ever you feel the need for an ear, i listen. i may respond immediately, but i do answer. even if you just wish to vent...some people do understand.
very heartfelt write
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Re: Last String Left to Pull
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by morgana on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:56:33 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT!...I CAN REALLY RELATE!EXCELLENT WRK!...TTYL!
MY AIMS SN IS CHILIBAT147...IF YA EVR WANNA TLK!
PEAZ! |
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Re: Last String Left to Pull
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:26:43 PM AEST
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Very sad but please hang in there.
Lifes hard but ya gotta keep on keeping on as someday u will be grown with your own life.
Hang tuff, please.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Last String Left to Pull
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:16:36 AM AEST
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loved the poem
hope things are all right with you...
xoxo |
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