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Wandering
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
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my mind wanders more than it ought to
thinking; thoughtless
thoughts strengthen imagination
imagination lessens reality
my hands wander more than they ought to
moving; motionless
movement prevents boredom
boredoms intent is to make you think
my eyes wander more than they ought to
seeing; sightless
sight creates our reality
reality simulates what we see as truth
whats to come of my motions
i self efface my emotions
while you stand there and laugh.
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2002-12-18 00:20:00]
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Re: Wandering
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:38:05 AM AEST
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| wow... |
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Re: Wandering
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:39:09 PM AEST
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Grrr whoever is laughing at you then they need to stop...geez...thanks for sharing this one, your poetry is very captivating to read...it captures me and draws me in from beginning to end...Keep em' coming and by the way welcome to YPDC...
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Re: Wandering
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:26:58 PM AEST
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| gawd, this is a really well written poem, I know how you feel and so do others, but keep your head high and smile. *hugs* Kepp on writing! =) |
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Re: Wandering
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:21:31 PM AEST
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| This poem is great! Keep them coming... Welcome :) |
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Re: Wandering
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 12:04:17 AM AEST
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I liked the style of this poem... it's captivating!!
Jenni |
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