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DOWN AGAIN
Contributed by
brains_of_the_insane
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 04:02:35 PM in AEST
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I've been pushed down so many times
I feel this is the last
as I lay here fading
my thoughts are invaded by memories of my past.
I feel the pressure of shame and rejection building
as I lay here on the floor.
I have no strength to get up
I'm not worth it anymore!
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2005-03-17 16:02:35]
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Re: DOWN AGAIN
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by Dying_Angel on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 04:10:28 PM AEST
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| good but the ending was a bit weak...sorry! jen |
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Re: DOWN AGAIN
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 11:59:14 AM AEST
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| GOOD BUT I HAVE TO AGREE WITH JEN BUT KEEP WRITTING |
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