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On This Day.
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:32:55 PM in AEST
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If, there is ever a time that I have missed her,
then it is now and compounded by more.
If, I have ever felt of love's succour,
then it is now and it has never been more.
I can see now, as I never saw then,
the foolishness of my half-hearted endeavour.
I know now, what I never knew then,
that love is a place you have to discover.
Love is not a right, nor a privileged favor,
it is earned by deeds and perhaps a little more,
Love can't be forced, nor coerced if ever,
it is a gift given and received per fore.
It is strange, that I realise this,
on the very day, that I accepted its release,
It was a dream, this vision of bliss,
on all her love, I have decided to appease.
But on this day, I have set her free,
from this prison, my misguided love has built,
But on this day, I miss her more readily,
from this token, I have won no victory.
"I set it upon the hill overlooking the sea...this memorial to what once was...I am here to... well.. not to bury it, but perhaps to accept its conclusion"
~ Hazlan Zakaria a.k.a. Baronhawk 1.29am 18th March 2005.
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Re: On This Day.
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by xrockstheheart on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:41:54 PM AEST
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Re: On This Day.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:31:24 PM AEST
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ahhh Hazlan, my friend.
I find it hard to believe that anything you do is halfhearted.
This is a magnificent piece. Sad in its flow and hard in its lesson. It is well written and says oh so much more than what is on the page.
My heart goes out to you buddy
I will wish for you strength and an open door. |
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Re: On This Day.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:35:57 PM AEST
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Entirely relational.
"from this token, I have won no victory."
But gained in understanding, I suppose . . .
Write again soon.
N_F |
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Re: On This Day.
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 06:54:32 AM AEST
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A beaut write...
please keep writing...somewhere....somehow...
good luck
cheers!~ |
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