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if i die in my sleep
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:18:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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if tomorrow never comes,
how much have i lived,
what more could i give,
to deserve this life,
i never was a wife,
i never was a mother,
i never loved any other,
i have had joy,i have felt pain,
i have felt the sun in my eyes,the wind and the rain,
i have traveled the land,holding your hand,
i have smoked my pot in high demand,
indeed i can say my life has been grand,
but it is not yet fufilled,ihope my soul is not killed,
i have so many dreams that would be lost wishes,
you have more memories of me doing the dishes,
im not dwelling on death,
notwhile i have breathe,
beacause i don't want to miss out on what life's all about,
i wont scream and shout,
to let feelings out,
i dont have a doubt in my mind,
that peace i can find,
if tomorrow never comes,
just know how much i loved someone,i have lived and experienced true love.
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blackholesun
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2005-03-17 11:18:36]
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Re: if i die in my sleep
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:46:49 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and very relatable u r an excellant writter very artistic and imaginative
a most beautiful peice of writting . . .
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Re: if i die in my sleep
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by babyboo8 on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:57:05 AM AEST
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This is a very visual and beautiful poem,keep writing!I would like to see more!
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