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The Untold Truth
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:55:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You say you want to be just friends,
But do you mean goodbye?
Is that the easy way to end
The wish without the why?
You owe me nothing, as I owe
You equally, and yet
There's something in the undertow
I cannot just forget.
There's something lovely like a song
That's waiting to be heard,
Or like the feelings that belong
To some unspoken word.
And so with you I cannot simply
Smile and stay aloof.
I take the risk of asking frankly
For the untold truth.
Copyright ©
concrete_rose
... [
2005-03-17 10:55:21]
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Re: The Untold Truth
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by blackholesun on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:01:19 AM AEST
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| heh,i can understand how that feels,i liked the flow of this poem it was moving:) |
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Re: The Untold Truth
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:34:48 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done. I like the flow and your choice of rhymns. |
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Re: The Untold Truth
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by guts_n_glitter on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:38:55 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem, tis a good write. [x] |
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Re: The Untold Truth
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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i really like this poem. it makes ya think. great job
JENNI |
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Re: The Untold Truth
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:31:36 AM AEST
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i loved the flow of the poem
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