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sOuL dArK
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:05:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I lay there sprawled across the ground,
free from the ropes in which I was bound.
He has sliced my body many times -
but the pain has disappeared
My tears have dried up,
my limbs have gone numb -
now I wonder how I could have been so dumb.
Noone will find me,
I dont think I'll survive -
I guess I'll just lay here till death does arrive.
Everythings getting darker,
I think I'll be gone soon -
there's only one thing I ponder as I stare up at the moon...
How could you do this?
Why did you do this - To me?
Darkness has taken over my thoughts,
my mind,
my body...
and everything slowly fades to black.
Copyright ©
Delusions
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2005-03-17 05:05:15]
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Re: sOuL dArK
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by crickle on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:10:50 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this one, Its a fantastic poem, really emotionally expressive. Well done :) |
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Re: sOuL dArK
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by unforgiven on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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heya hun,
i love this one. it's eerily emotional. great imagery in the poem and i can definately relate to the message you were showing in the poem. i'm glad i get to see your gift and you have chosen to share it with me. thank you for always supporting me and for encouraging my poetry. you truly are a wonderful and talented friend.
love you always
beccaj |
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