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a suicide note found on a beach in oceanside, ca
Contributed by
summers
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:09:10 AM in AEST
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we were in oceanside on the fourth of july.
the year was 1995.
we sat on the sand and watched the waves roll back against the sky.
these were our tides on our hot summer night.
this is my most cherished memory of you.
july 4, 1999.
the same waves roll into the sky.
once our tides and now something i don’t know,
just another drift of undertow…
in oceanside where all my memories reside,
i’ve finally decided what i have to do.
i have to coincide with these memories,
and these waves, once ours,
will wash me out to sea.
and solemnly i’ll float like driftwood to my demise.
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summers
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2005-03-17 02:09:10]
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Re: a suicide note found on a beach in oceanside, ca
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:33:24 AM AEST
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No your memory's live in your heart and soul always, and no one but you can take them away, doing precisly that as in ur poem. But might i say ur message is beautiful and the message in your bottle doesent need to be so@
I have been to ocean side C.A. it is beautiful there I was there for about 2 weeks, I hope to go back soon! |
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Re: a suicide note found on a beach in oceanside, ca
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:27:29 AM AEST
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| I really like your style of writing. I'll be reading more from you in the future, as you are very talented. |
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