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You? Me? Us? We?

Contributed by tin on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:46:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Although we are different,
to say we're the same wouldn't be wrong,
apart we are weak,
together we are strong

When i kiss you,
and you kiss me,
there's no you,
there's no me,
there's just us.
there's nothing else i want to be.

I tell a joke and you laugh,
I tell a sad story and you cry,
our emotions are one,
and i think i know why.

When my body hurts,
your heart aches,
when you feel any pain,
my heart quakes,
When together we are one,
the real thing, not a fake.

when my problems are rising
it's you i confide in,
when i do nothing but lose
you give me the boost i need to win

When your day has been bad,
it's my shoulder you cry on,
when you're feeling so tired,
my chest is the pillow you lie on,
so great when we're together,
our love will always shine on.

not you,
not me,
just us,
just we.

Now we're kissing in the rain,
our favorite kind of weather,
our future will be great,
but i wish this moment would last forever.
it's our love that makes us feel,
so perfect in this weather.




Copyright © tin ... [ 2005-03-17 00:46:06]
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Re: You? Me? Us? We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:49:29 AM AEST
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*awwed*.this is absolutily lovely, just lovely. need i say more?


Re: You? Me? Us? We? (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:56:06 AM AEST
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this was great :) i know exactly how you feel, there is no me and you when it comes to love, just US. great job...

Curtis


Re: You? Me? Us? We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:20:22 AM AEST
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That was a very sweet poem and I hope ur Love appreciates and reads this!




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