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We Know The Feeling

Contributed by monkey on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You gotta get away
I know the feeling

You cant help but let your thoughts
wander
into the darker corners of your mind

That pill bottle
calls your name
the black gun
whispers in your ear
pieces of rope
reach out and grab you

When you cant bring yourself to complete your
own task
you turn to the knife
that sleeps quietly
in its well hidden spot
waiting patiently
to feel the warmth of your flesh

Anger
builds up
and attaches itself to the walls of your heart,
turning it ice cold
shutting out the ones you love most

No one has any idea
they believe that smile
you have perfected,
the one that makes them think
your life is okay

You wish someone would take the time
to see the pain in youreyes
and hurt in your heart
you wish someone would take the time
and listen to what you
dont say
you wish someone would take the time
to help you over the obstacles
that have been thrown in your way

the rest of the world can relate

dont quit
quitting is the easy way out

Copyright © monkey ... [ 2005-03-16 23:23:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: We Know The Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 11:02:31 AM AEST
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That pill bottle
calls your name
the black gun
whispers in your ear
pieces of rope
reach out and grab you

very nice...i liked it...well written...

Auryn

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