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Enamored
Contributed by
jaavys
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am your guardian angel
But this I cannot bear
To watch over your soul
When all I do is care
What is this condemnation?
Is this the hell I fear?
To be right next to you
And yet not have you near
I am your guardian angel
And Holy Pardon Pray
Forgive me for I've lost my soul
And at her side I stay
And now I ask forgiveness
And have but one request
To live and die a second time
Enamored is my quest
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2002-12-17 21:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Enamored
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST (User
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Omg that last part gave me chills so bad...where it says And now i ask forgiveness and have but one request, to live and die a second time Enamored is my quest..ahhh that's absolutely beautiful, i think this is my favorite of yours...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...
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Re: Enamored
(User Rating: 1 ) by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:58:19 PM AEST (User
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This poem is so completely beautiful. there is so much that can be said, but my words are lost... the last 4 lines, can show ho it might be for angels, to live apart from us beyond the skies, but still they live alone, and long for love, i guess somthings may be the same after death as well, or thats what this poem has made me come to believe..
Bis Spater
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Re: Enamored
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaavys on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 08:12:02 PM AEST (User
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thank you, it is one of my favorites also |
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Re: Enamored
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:50:24 PM AEST (User
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wow!! stunning lovely write! ooooh i love this:) |
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