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Hangover
Contributed by
Les4567
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:44:47 PM in AEST
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Another Day
I wake up to this
World of sorrow
I turn up the covers
Crawl out of bed
The sound of birds chirping
Echoing in my head
I stumble around until
My vision is clear
I shouldn't have
Drank that one last beer
Walk to the kitchen
Grab a cup of coffee
The caffine
Intoxicating me
My stomach feels
Queazy
Pop a few
Tylenol head off
To work
Eyes as red as cherries
I sit at my desk
Stacks of paperwork
Awaiting me
I look at them
With great enthusiasm
Just another
Hangover I wish I didn't have
Copyright ©
Les4567
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2005-03-16 21:44:47]
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Re: Hangover
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:57:50 PM AEST
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| you've got to hate those days. lol. |
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Re: Hangover
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:30:14 PM AEST
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those are the worst. i've seen ppl literally turn green from hangovers. but they just smoke a few bulls and its all better.
ALD |
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Re: Hangover
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by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:53:33 PM AEST
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| I really like how you put the words together, I think that this is a really good poem. Good write! |
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Re: Hangover
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:58:42 PM AEST
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these were the best lines,
"Another Day
I wake up to this
World of sorrow" your ending was original, and nothing should take away from that either. an excellent poem well expressed. you have a unique style that is refreshing. maybe the next day wont be another day....
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