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Drifting Away
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:50:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You hear my voice
But you don’t see me
You feel the presence
Of the past
But my time has run out
My spirits drifting away fast
Each second of each day
You are getting more and more
Closer to me
Soon your time will be over
And together we will be
I’ll meet you on the other side
Those words that I once said
Won’t be erased from your thoughts
That are inside of your head
Now your time is now
And you can remain with me
In the one place we will be in
Together forever we will be
Copyright ©
xxSuicidalChickxx
... [
2005-03-16 20:50:47]
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Re: Drifting Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by write_whenit_hurts on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST
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| wow, that's really good! i can relate to that very well! i love how u constructed this! mi applause. |
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Re: Drifting Away
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by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST
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| Exellent write! I really like how you put your poem together. |
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