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Falling
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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when the time comes
when i end it all
i wonder will you catch me
when i start to fall
or will you just look
cause you tried to read me
like an open book
but you don't know me at all
now I've started bleeding
your soaked in my bloody tears
you hear my piercing screams
but you don't listen
you just bite your lip
and hope that i wont be here
over the coming years
Copyright ©
xxSuicidalChickxx
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2005-03-16 20:44:57]
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 )
by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:56:41 PM AEST
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| Hey again, I really like your writing style. I hope to read somemore of your work. Good Job! |
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Re: Falling
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:30:56 PM AEST
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hmmm..I've felt like this before....I normally like longer more expressed poems but you did a great job here with just two stanza..=]
Clark |
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