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The Angel's Wall
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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She built a wall of ash and thorns around her frail body.
A place where the raindrops wouldn't touch
and the roses wilted in an ongoing repitition.
Always cold, the dead air came in stale gusts
and left in bitter whispers.
He had promised her they'd fly
and now she was enclosed
in a damp prison of her own tears
as a product of her bleeding eyes.
She lay in a puddle of insanity
and the temperate pain that she'd never fly,
...just drown the fallen angel without wings.
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Inevitable
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2005-03-16 20:10:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Angel's Wall
(User Rating: 1 ) by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST (User
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It's so sad... =( A well-written piece,
nevertheless. Nice descriptions, they're very
effective in creating the mood and overall
feel of this poem. |
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