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Canis Lupus
Contributed by
Ash
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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We bay our praise to the full moon
As our ululating cries,
ring through the ebon skies
our fellow worshipers commune
We howl our prayers to the gods of night
Sing the song of our kin
Story of our ancestors therein
Reveling in the power of our birthright
Many as one, loping down the secret trails
legs pumping
Hearts jumping
Our movements in synch, haunting hill and dale
A mournful howl signals that the hunt begins
The pack splits in two
And the chase ensues
We give chase and as one we give a wolfish grin
As we feast on our kill, my feral eyes sweep the glade
yellow eyes reflect the light
so like my own, as I bless the night
Thankful for my fellow hunters, illuminate in the moonlit cascade
Alas the night comes to an end, agony as I die inside and keen
Grey fur withdraws, two legs instead of four
I wake up naked, on the forest floor
Sun dappled skin, once again, wolf no more
Until the moonlight kisses my skin, my wolves soul remains unseen.
Copyright ©
Ash
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2002-12-17 20:20:00]
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Re: Canis Lupus
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:00:34 PM AEST
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| i think this is great. your words really draw out what you're trying to express in the poem. good job. |
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Re: Canis Lupus
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:59:16 PM AEST
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Oh absolutely beautiful, bravo! this is beautifully written, thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
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Re: Canis Lupus
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:50:17 PM AEST
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this is really good, and really expresses the metamorphosis of the human into somthing else, and the sadness that must come over one as they change back from a beautiful hnter, to something they dont feel they are naturally..
Bis Spater
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Re: Canis Lupus
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:14:26 AM AEST
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| lovely......enjoyed it all the way and brilliant ending.......... |
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Re: Canis Lupus
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 03:09:52 PM AEST
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Great indeed created some frightening imagery in my head.
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