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The Blood Waltz
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 07:04:15 PM in AEST
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I’ve been hunting the scabs of your womb.
And in the limitations of my flesh,
I have found a placenta of carcinogens,
Humbled in a duct tape illiteracy.
Twenty different hangnails witnessed you,
Strung in a blood waltz between the knees.
A squeamish upside down molestation,
In an awkward pasture of sanguine condoms.
The roaches eat all over your sodomy,
Such that I tore a gaping hole of ribbon,
In your trachomatous chrysalis of paranoia.
It gets me so naked of this cocoon.
You are such a page-turner parked in exile.
That ostentatious barbed wire mask,
Cannot rape out the dirty letters,
Without ***** from my neck.
Binging on this flacid cancer,
And in every riddle that I pine,
A seated cadaver wriggles out horrors,
That spell, “Let it all rot!!”
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2005-03-16 19:04:15]
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Re: The Blood Waltz
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:09:40 PM AEST
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| Very strong write, so intensely morbid... |
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Re: The Blood Waltz
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by Cancer on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:44:28 AM AEST
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i ran across your scrawl when i wasn't logged in, and if you knew the extent of my laziness, you would understand how much i had to love this to log in and comment. aside from that, i don't know what to say. this was ***** amazing on an unsettling number of levels.
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Re: The Blood Waltz
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 01:24:34 AM AEST
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| Wow. Powerful. |
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Re: The Blood Waltz
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by Butterat_Zool on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 02:06:43 PM AEST
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I'll drink to that.
BZ. |
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