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Walk the way with me
Contributed by
DanishPoet
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 04:53:04 PM in AEST
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Fear of darkness;
tell me what you see.
Don't feel the fear
let your guardian be me.
You know I'll never let you down
even though you fall.
You can tell me every problem
no matter big or small.
The length of the path
that you have to walk fort,
I can't make it go faster.
But I can make it feel short
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Re: Walk the way with me
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:28:49 PM AEST
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Re: Walk the way with me
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by Daniels_Princess on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:45:16 PM AEST
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"You know I'll never let you down
even though you fall"
Sent chills through out me..
"I can't make it go faster
But I can make it feel short"
I loved that line..something I think everyone can relate to..we all have someone that can make hard times easier..whether it be a friend, a loved one..or the one that we all have..God..
Great write, I really enjoyed reading this. |
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