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Walking in my shadow....
Contributed by
mina-1
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 03:51:39 PM in AEST
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You lifted me to grounds
I thought I could never tread
Believed in me in everyway
Even when my heart astray was lead
You protected me from failure
From the troubles in my life
Guarded me from heart breakers and
Guys who'd gave me strife
You watched out for me
You cared in so many ways
Always being there for me
Even when I told you to go away
I look at you admirably and
I wished that I could be
Everything that you are
Special and trusting, unlike me
Your presence was always felt
In the distance you were there
To catch me before I fell
Showing me how much you care
You never asked for anything
Never wanting anything in return
Just for me to be happy
Was Your main concern
I was always in the spotlight
You always made me shine
Walking in my shadow
The coldness in the outlines
While all that time you were in pain
An illness taking hold of you
I was too wrapped up in myself
I didn't see the suffering you went through
I'm so sorry I was selfish
I wished I could turn back time
Just to let you know
That my love for you is prime
You're my unsung hero
Who made the best of everything
The one who lifted me high
You were the guiding wind beneath
my wings
Now that you"re gone
I hold the memories of you
Of my beautiful unsung hero and
All the pleasant things you used to do....
May your soul rest in peace, Peter.
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Re: Walking in my shadow....
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 04:17:11 PM AEST
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| very good, touching. |
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Re: Walking in my shadow....
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 06:34:16 PM AEST
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Oh hun...this is so sad...
*hugs you tons*
I am so so sorry for your loss. And I am sure he is with you. I'm sure he knows.
Great write my friend,
Here if you need me,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Walking in my shadow....
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:58:05 PM AEST
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I'm so sooy for your loss but this is a great masterpeice and tribute.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Walking in my shadow....
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 06:27:28 AM AEST
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Hold on to those memories of Peter
You wrote this poem wonderfully
Take Care.
cheers!~ |
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Re: Walking in my shadow....
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:02:59 PM AEST
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I was reading thru your poetry Sue and you have this way of making cry with each poem!
It is like you pen your soul and that always gets to me.
You reach depths, I cannot imagine and touch, really touch the reader.
My condolescenes in regards to your loss.
Kie |
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