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Loser Through and Through
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When I'm mad enough to kill,
And weak enough to go with someone else's will
When I've got nowhere to go,
And I'm down and out, flat outta dough
Wondering where I went wrong,
And why I must play this sad song
Wondering why all I see is 'user error'
Locked inside, my skin has gone pasty and fairer
The gun is shaking in my hand,
And through my bloodied hands slips sand
The frown on my face gives way to tears,
And all I see are your jeers and leers
In desperation, I cut and burn
You don't understand its to late for me to turn
In desperation, I realize I can't win
Amid this terrifying, tumultous din
When I can't stop shaking
When my biggest fear is waking
When I don't think I can make it through the day,
And when I don't know why I feel this way
I'm a loser through and through
That is nothing new
I'm a loser through and through
That much is true
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2002-12-17 19:20:00]
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Re: Loser Through and Through
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:01:13 AM AEST
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| you say there's no real story behind this...but i think there has to be to write something like this...this is really sad... |
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Re: Loser Through and Through
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:51:23 PM AEST
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Ah Joel this is captivating...but i don't think your a loser that much i can say ...and if there is a real story behind this one and the last poem then you have such a good way of hiding it my friend....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it...
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Re: Loser Through and Through
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by Love_letters on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:43:02 PM AEST
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I'm sadden to think this is true. I feel you need a refuge to release your pain. If you want to talk to a complete stranger - I can be there for you. You are not a loser, just a person who lost temperary sight of his/her direction.
Please stay strong. As a writer, you illustrate a very powerful piece of writing. Great job. Consider being published. |
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