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Three Little Words
Contributed by
Broken_Inside
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 07:43:12 AM in AEST
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You lost it again
Its all in your head
The way you feel
You don't even know
Pick up the pieces
Get away
Let me hide from you
Just this once god
Let me mask the truth
Let me hide the tears
That never stop falling
Let me hide the broken lies
Just let me hide the pain
Don't kick me when I am down
Just let me drown
Looking in the mirror
In my eyes
I whisper the three little words
That always destroy me in the end
I whisper I love you
How can such a saying hurt so much?
How can three little words be my demise?
I just want the truth!
But instead...
I hide
Copyright ©
Broken_Inside
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2005-03-16 07:43:12]
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Re: Three Little Words
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:25:51 AM AEST
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| Friendship, friendship time will tell you if the three little words are geniune. Keep writing my best Wesley Willis |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by gothicangel on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:16:26 AM AEST
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| gr8 poem.. You really express yourself good at this one.. Keep on going.. I need to read more of your work=) |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:42:58 AM AEST
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| Those three little words are really rather large words that shouldn't be used lightly. You've written a very good poem. |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by alexb on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:01:18 AM AEST
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| this is my fav subject b/c i relate to it alot....good work |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:29:27 AM AEST
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well expressed dark write, keep up the good work,
pix xx |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by unrestrained19 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:19:06 PM AEST
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| i hope you don't think that i am a stalker...i really loved this poem too...when its centered like that it looks like an arrow pointing down...very cool!!! |
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Re: Three Little Words
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by Les4567 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:47:53 PM AEST
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I liked this poem alot. You are talented good work
Cant wait for some more poems by you.
~Leslie
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Re: Three Little Words
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:57:52 AM AEST
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I know the feelings.
Great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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