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So What
Contributed by
secretwind
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:02:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't help myself
but I'm impressed
that I no longer need
or want
to do anything
but laugh and sing
I now ignore
that I need more.
Bleeding
from falling down
I'm fading
Vanishing into a void....
silently I scream
and I no longer care
I'm a ghost no one sees.
Footsteps echo
I'm all alone now
It's so beautiful
not to care anymore,
there's no no need for me
to spread the infection
of my pain and misery.
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secretwind
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2005-03-15 23:02:43]
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Re: So What
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:21:40 PM AEST
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This really strikes a chord with me. You'll forgve me for saying so (I hope), but it feels very much like the sort of thinking I employed for a long while to deal... well... what I didn't want to deal with - if you know what i mean. I'd argue, perhaps, that you may not be the ghost you think you are - a ghost would have no refection, I believe--- and surely, at least one reader saw themselves in this.
Well done, secretwind -- I'm inclined to think I need to read more of your work.
Keep writing,
SNM
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Re: So What
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:07:50 AM AEST
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OMGSH,
Secret I have been feeling excacitally like you say in ur poem any more, I mean I've always felt kinda like that but lately I no longer feel the need for n e of my addictions, which may seem a good thing but I dont enjoy anything n e more, I stay in my rrom all day until everyone else is ready for bed and then I get on here until sometimes 6am. But I am holding on to God all I listen to music wise is pink flloyd comfortably numb and of course Tory Amos, but i know this is just a turning point in my life things will change and they will get better foy me and you!!! |
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Re: So What
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:32:14 PM AEST
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| brilliant. even better the second time. which is an accomplishment, most poems arent worth reading even once. but this was. this is one you should be proud of. |
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