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blind
Contributed by
brains_of_the_insane
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:48:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I tried hard to deal with this *****
but then i realized I just could'nt do it
lifes not all its cut out to be
it seems like it dont ***** anyone other but me
everyone tells me to do better, maybe thats why I have up
yeah i messed up...so did you, so ***** what
im sick of everything, im sick of it all
everytime I try to get up, I just ***** fall
nothing is worth getting back up for
I thought there was, but not anymore
so the only thing anyone will know bout me is what I wrote
yeah thats right, this is my ***** suicide note
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Re: blind
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST (User
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Quite an angry write; although I found the fourth line to be amusing. The fire is carried out well though throughout the poem. Good write and welcome. (^_^)v |
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