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My Place
Contributed by
justme03
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:07:11 PM in AEST
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I need a place
I can call my own
A place that is
my own home
A place where
I can be alone
and think
of all
the gifts I
own
It took me
awhile
to find myself
a place where
I can
be myself
I found it in
a place
concealed from
all
though it has
not a
wall
The place I found
is all
mine
Where I can
be myself
and shine
I found it
in the most peculiar place,
a place of
lines,
a place of
order,
a place of
curious
wonder
Here it is,
right here
I seemed to
have made
home on a piece
of paper
-Kortnie-
Copyright ©
justme03
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2005-03-15 20:07:11]
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Re: My Place
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:11:15 PM AEST
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| hey i like your writting its amazing. your a really good writter at your age~~ Crystal~~ |
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Re: My Place
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by electrique_poet on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:24:49 PM AEST
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i like the arrangement of this as well as how its written, well done
... in words electrique |
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Re: My Place
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:52:08 PM AEST
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Very good writing as it shows the impotence of pen-n-pad and the awesome freedom in writing.
Keep it up as this is a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Place
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:54:51 PM AEST
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| I really liked this. I hope you share some more with us. |
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Re: My Place
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:08:30 PM AEST
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| Very good. Much better than I would expect from a fourteen year old. Please, keep writing. Your off to such a good start. Good luck to you and God bless you. |
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Re: My Place
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:53:33 PM AEST
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Ahhhh...Yes another great writer...so far...That I can add to my list of like 5 or 6 at this site....I really like this poem and it really struck home.....Great job and I'll be waiting for more...Because It reminds me so much of my own poems....Again great job
Clark |
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Re: My Place
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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I must say you are quite talented. You write much better than i did at your age. I think you will grow to be an amazing poet. You used great imagery. I love the format most of all. Keep writing. You were born for it.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: My Place
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:48:47 AM AEST
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Wow for a 14 year old you sure do know how to write, keep writing sweetie and i'll check more of your poems soon.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: My Place
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by suesan on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM AEST
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| you can realy tell when something comes from the heart! I Loved it |
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