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Scissors
Contributed by
princess_of_pain
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:06:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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scissors
blades
keeping me oh so sane
you saw one little cut and claim that im out of my brian
insane
wut about flames?
lightin this fire
fulfillin my desire
pain, what reigns in this whole game
of life
strife
this knife
deep into the flesh, watch it go
looking down at my wrist
seeing all the blood flow
as i fall to the ground
on the cold bathroom floor
just one more cut
that’s all i live for
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princess_of_pain
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2005-03-15 20:06:55]
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Re: Scissors
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:12:54 PM AEST
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(applauds) Bravo! Loved it!
--Kara |
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Re: Scissors
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:13:07 PM AEST
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| you write sucide poetry i like it.I am in to deep and dark writting..I though it was good. Ibet your lyrics are good too ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Scissors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:52:44 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. I hope you share more of your work with us. |
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Re: Scissors
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by SimplyMe on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:52:46 AM AEST
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This was breath taking. I loved it. If you write poetry so well i'd love to see your lyrics. You should do both. Great write.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Scissors
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by 2ndChance on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:14:54 PM AEST
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Loved it! So much. VERY lyrical. You can write songs on here too. (btw.) The only thing is, the poems called "Scissors" and there's that line that says "this knife"...yeah...not that I noticed...lol.
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Re: Scissors
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by JenJen on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:08:41 PM AEST
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omg this is such a gd poem reli deep and meaningful!! great poem sad words
good luck
Jen
xxx |
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