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The Silence
Contributed by
justme03
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:38:12 PM in AEST
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The silence is deafening
I can no longer think
The silence is deafening
the sound my ears meet
The silence is deafening-
filled up with sounds
that pass through the air
and over the grounds
I sit in the silence-
awaiting my fate
I sit in the silence-
a long time to wait
I sit in the silence-
the time passing me by
Sometimes I wonder
why I even try
-Kortnie-
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2005-03-15 19:38:12]
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Re: The Silence
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:42:14 PM AEST
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good work. I think we all have these moments of silence from time to time when we really wonder why.
Keep writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Silence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:54:53 PM AEST
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| i like that. keep writing. id like to read more |
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Re: The Silence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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| Awesome piece. I enjoyed the flow of it. Nice work. You're very talented. |
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Re: The Silence
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:01:06 PM AEST
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the only problem I have with this poem is that you repeated "The silence is deafening" and "I sit in the silence-"....I would have liked it better if you would have used different words getting the same message across...but still an amazing poem....I'll be waiting for more...
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Re: The Silence
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by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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| I know this poem is old, but its still very good...sorry I had to see your old work lol |
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